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Zinsser
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0 posted 2002-08-25 10:48 AM




Where did the time go
Like from afar
I gaze upon your
Beauty
Your youth
Inside and out
A piece of art
Once so small
So dependent
Now grown
One of your own
I see you in her
You know
From the twinkle
In her eyes
To her little tiny toes
Watching over you
Watching over her
Is my gift
The chain of love
Forever
Unbroken



© Copyright 2002 Connie McDonald - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2002-08-25 11:28 AM


Zinsser~
Oh, this is just so sweetly done~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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Zinsser
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2 posted 2002-08-25 11:53 AM


Marge:  Thank You.... this came from a photo that was taken... great picture... says so much with out a word....
~~ Connie ~~

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3 posted 2002-08-25 01:38 PM


This is beautiful! Thank you for this word  portrait of love.
Bill Charles
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4 posted 2002-08-25 01:41 PM


zinsser - you write of sweetness and love well. Very nice...

BC

Lone Wolf
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5 posted 2002-08-25 08:44 PM


So sweet!!  Great write, Zinsser.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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6 posted 2002-08-25 09:06 PM


Connie,  can I borrow you for a while, like
maybe about the rest of my life....or at
least just have someone like you...to let me
feel that love, till time is still..and
no more...

WhiteRose
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7 posted 2002-08-25 09:57 PM


This is lovely. A view from a grandparents eyes. I see my son in my grandson and it warms my heart with memories of the man when he was just a boy.
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8 posted 2002-08-25 10:24 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, may true loves joy alwas fill your heart and be true art to you! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Connie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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