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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2002-08-25 10:30 AM



There breaths inside my heart
A shivered dawning drive
Where autumn draws expressive art
In crisp cool dreams to thrive

Another morning surges hard
To clear the foggy dawn
As last and first in best regard
In love of life to fawn

Then this peculiar feeling gives
A blessing moist to thirst
Beside so fully heaven sieves
A show and place traversed

There breaths inside these waking hours
A time of gentle tales
Where always to reside with me
A newborn love prevails

Another day spent solely in
A closeness to your side
When autumn colors peak again
Another scope collide

Copyright Kkh 8/25/02

© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Bill Charles
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1 posted 2002-08-25 01:13 PM


ThisDiamond - a gem you've written that sparkles this morning...

BC

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2 posted 2002-08-25 01:26 PM




(smiles) Oh Kathleen, this is wonderful, I love it! The colors of autumn always bring a smile to my face! (kiss on cheek) This is beautifully breathtaking, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-08-25 04:46 PM


Your 8/6 flow of this adds to the beauty of
the poem's picture....Nicely done,  flurb
away Gridley!!

Madame Chipmunk
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4 posted 2002-08-25 06:47 PM


This is lovely, Kathy...
Oh how it makes me yearn for autumn...
my very favorite season
when acorns abound.
~ hugs and acorns

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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5 posted 2002-08-25 07:37 PM


Simply a lovely write. Enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

WhiteRose
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6 posted 2002-08-25 08:17 PM


You've written a lovely poem. Certainly one worth reading again and again. Enjoyed.
Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2002-08-26 09:32 AM


What a delightful read you have gifted us with.  I enjoyed this, thank you.

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

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