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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2002-08-24 01:03 PM


“NOT JUST ANYONE”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Met her a while ago,
has dark brown hair…
Cheek bones high,
her smile to care…

Eyes softest sapphire,
piercing at times…
Delicately beautiful,
all of her rhymes…

Holds my hand tightly,
warm like her heart…
Said we’d be one,
never would we part…

An Indian Princess,
not just anyone…
Kept me together,
when I was broken…
~~~~


© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-08-24 01:06 PM


Bill,
Well you know what you want. Lots of luck, enjoyed.

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-08-24 01:07 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I imagined the Indian princess in this with her hand on your shoulder telling you everything would be alright and gently hugging you with compassion! (big hugggggssss) I am blessed you have this special friend in your life as we are all happy to be your friends, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-08-24 01:57 PM


Lovely write Bill...
Sounds as though you have penned 'your' perfect woman.
Enjoyed the read.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Elizabeth
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4 posted 2002-08-24 01:59 PM


This is very sweet, Bill. She sounds wonderful.

God bless America, my home sweet home.

Gabriel Frost
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5 posted 2002-08-24 02:04 PM


Really smooth writing bill!
The indian princess part caught me wide open cause I was planning to write a poem about my love, actually mentioniong that she's indian. Some coincidence!!!

Madame Chipmunk
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6 posted 2002-08-24 03:33 PM


Oh Wow, Bill....
wonderful writing here...
~ lots of hugs

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

NewEnglandlazurlu
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7 posted 2002-08-24 04:01 PM


BC this is so special....I enjoyed this very much.

Hugs, Marti              

Marge Tindal
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8 posted 2002-08-24 04:31 PM


BillCharles~
Just lovely~
Honest Injun~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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