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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-08-14 08:51 PM

My King,

I come to thee as thy humble knight
to tell of that which ye wish not to hear.

Before the dawn of the third day
as the rise of the red sun touches the
clouds above our heads. We,  my lord,
all of us...

will be struggling to quell the flow
of battle raining down, as rain does fall
upon the killing fields.

The armies of two countries march as I speak.
Riding lathered steeds,  blood in their eyes,
seeking death and defeat of all thy realm.

Cursed is thy name to those that come against us.

My lord,  though I may not live to see the
morn after…

I stand at thy side,  as thy servant, faithful
to all there is before me,

to the seas at the great white cliffs beyond the
forest green,  the mountains high.

As far as my eyes can see beyond the tears
that stream from my face.

I give to you my life,  blood of my heart, my soul
in this hour of great peril.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-08-14 09:00 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Barry, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, indeed these are times of great peril but love can always perservere and it is all we need to feel strong and happy inside! (sigh) This is sensitive and beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-08-14 09:07 PM

FANTASTIC write Barry!
So much enjoyed!
~Sighs and hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

ShadowRider
Senior Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 1038
USA

3 posted 2002-08-14 09:47 PM

Brave Knight
you are the blade that stands strong
the lance that reaches beyond grasps
the armor that broucades the horizon in safety
but of all this,
you shall forever stay a Knight
for you know the blood of the faithful.
jeff

Lady Ollyne
Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 337
East Coast

4 posted 2002-08-14 10:03 PM

Sir Magnus,
I beg of thee
to take care and
come back safely
to those who hold thee
in passionate thoughts.

Lady Ollyne

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2002-08-14 10:45 PM

Barry - these of the knight are well done...

BC

Wanda
Member

since 2001-10-23

Posts 461

6 posted 2002-08-15 11:18 PM

Barry, I just stopped by to say "hello" and tell you how much I enjoyed the read. You know how I love the words you pen about the humble knights. Take care. Wanda

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2002-08-16 05:09 AM

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