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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2002-08-23 02:29 PM


Dribble drabble, sometimes I babble
yet people read my words
cuz this sort of dribble
they have never heard.
Sometimes backwards my words I write
to make a word rhyme in the light
to get a thought, a point conveyed
of ideas stuck in my head that day.
Days of glory, days of rust
writ of harmony and pure lust.
Lust for words, lust for life
to rid my fears, to rid my strife.
Strife of madness to no release
to search a heart for inner peace.
Peace in words while ramble in thought
this web of words within I'm caught.



If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (08-23-2002 04:24 PM).]

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WhiteRose
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1 posted 2002-08-23 02:30 PM


You are in good company Donna, many a poet is caught up in that web. I love the poem.
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2 posted 2002-08-23 02:39 PM




(smiles) Oh Donna, I think we can all fall prey to this web, yet it is a wonderful feeling to be inspired in so many ways! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I always love what you write so much, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2002-08-23 02:43 PM



"Come into my parlor,"
said the spider to the fly...
but a web of words? Far stickier!
For someone like you and I...

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (08-23-2002 02:44 PM).]

Enchantress
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4 posted 2002-08-23 04:12 PM


So cute Donna...
and do we not all write for differnt reasons?
Sure helps though huh?
I always feel better when I get it all out.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2002-08-23 05:01 PM


Thanks all, was just playing around with words this afternoon. Just to make the day fun.  

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

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