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darkened dusk depravity
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darkened dusk depravity |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I offered book most wickedly and said, "If that is true, you'll swear..." "Take your palm. Receive the calm. then tell me there is nothing there..." "I promise you. You will feel nails..." I swear, by bottom lip--bit frail-- I tremble now upon my cross-- flesh be "just" the holocaust. You think we argue gods, but no... between lines, it's written so. Marry me within my mind and leave my languages unspoke. Melt the crystal rock of time-- chopped in lines until I choke. I'm searching for another way-- I wait for sun in nail of edge... grasping at stars hope of trail-- I blanket myself dark instead. I pull the sheet over my head. Too bad. How sad. Pronounce me--"dead." give me just three days repose... then let the stone roll from the hole. Lazarus shall rise renewed... Tell me you don't feel it too... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Take your palm. Receive the calm. then tell me there is nothing there..." "I promise you. You will feel nails..." I swear, by bottom lip--bit frail-- I tremble now upon my cross-- flesh be "just" the holocaust. You think we argue gods, but no... between lines, it's written so. Marry me within my mind and leave my languages unspoke. Melt the crystal rock of time-- chopped in lines until I choke. I'm searching for another way-- I wait for sun in nail of edge... grasping at stars hope of trail-- I blanket myself dark instead. ==================================== give me just three days repose... then let the stone roll from the hole. Lazarus shall rise renewed... Tell me you don't feel it too... ============================ .............. damn ..........  In the space between now and then |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
witch..... you continue to amaze me... so when is it you are going to put all these together and have them published? |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
yes to what JM and Cpat said and I add *sigh* you are so powerful with your words and the meanings... it takes awhile to absorb it all but then that's what makes fine art imo you blaze, Karen NO pun intended b |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
The darkness answers with whispered screams. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
p-p-p-publish? like in a book? with numbers on pages and stuff? aw'gitouttatown! But thanks for the lovely compliment. And Jan? yer my girlie! love you muchly me mothy muse--  bri--inspired by some reading about mystery religions of olde and the meanings of certain rituals...interesting stuff, that, sheds alot of light on Biblical customs, and gives new meaning to the stories on New Testament. mmmmmmmmm.  mooonlight romeo...thanks so much for popping in, I'm always happy to know I've given someone a bit of pleasure... oh.  I swear that stuff just comes out...geez...thank all! |
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