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garysgirl
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0 posted 2002-10-10 09:18 AM


HE  TRIES  TO  DESCRIBE  HIS  LOVE  TO  ME

Such beautiful poems and songs
he always writes to me
He also paints colorful pictures
with words, you see
His love for me is as beautiful
as can be
A   FOREVER   LOVE   we have found
I do believe


He says if he could describe his love
in just a single word
It would start with  "A", end in  "Z"
one no-one's ever heard
His words are as beautiful as
the song of a bird
They are the sweetest words that I
have ever heard


His love would circle the Heavens and
back, until the end of time
If his love for me he could write
in just a single line
Pictures he draws for me in all colors
oh, so very fine
And to think this wonderful man
is forever mine


He can't describe his love for me in
just a single day
He says there would certainly be
no possible way
And to try would make him feel bad
and sad, he did say
If he had to describe his love for me
in just a single day


If he had to describe his love for me
in just a single song
He says it would be the greatest ballad
ever to be sung
And that it would surely be a million,
billion hours long
If he had to describe his love for me
in just a single song


He says he can't describe his love for
me in just a single life
He asked me if I would please become
his loving wife
With this wonderful love we have there
surely would not be much strife
He wants to describe his love for me
for all of our life


To describe his love he says there is
just not enough time or ways
But he promises to keep trying for the
rest of our days
And from our  FOREVER  LOVE  we both
promise not to stray
And we promise to love each other forever
and forever, and a day

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (10-10-2002 09:21 AM).]

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1 posted 2002-10-10 09:23 AM


those kinds of promises, when kept, are the best kind...

nice work my friend... nice work

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2 posted 2002-10-10 09:24 AM


Kielo,
You took me on a magic carpet ride and I loved it. Thank you for posting.

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3 posted 2002-10-10 09:33 AM


Have you accepted his proposal of marriage?

With that kind of love for each other, I'm sure it will last forever and a day!

~ May all your days together be filled with sunlight and your nights bathed in the glow of the moon and the stars ~

Linda

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4 posted 2002-10-10 09:53 AM


'... And from our  FOREVER  LOVE  we both
promise not to stray
And we promise to love each other forever
and forever, and a day ...'

You are one very lucky couple to have such love and devotion for each other.

A beautiful, loving poem and I liked it very much. Great job.

Now you hang onto that guy ... hugs, Marti

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5 posted 2002-10-10 10:07 AM


Cpat, oh yes, they sure are. As is obvious, I'm sure, I got this inspiration from a poem he wrote to me a couple of years ago.

Seymour, thanks for reading and your poetic comments.
(Kielo??? Oops!)


Linda, oh yes, we are engaged. But because of circumstances beyond our control, we aren't  "legally"  married yet. We will be, though (and already are  "one"  in our spirits and hearts). In the meantime, we see each other as much as possible and talk on the phone every day (enormous long distance calls). I'm going to go to see him this weekend. I'm  SOOOOOO  excited!!
Thanks for your comments, dear lady.


WITH  LOVE  AND  BEST  WISHES  TO  ALL

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6 posted 2002-10-10 10:16 AM


Sorry, Marti, I missed you, there. Thanks so much for your sweet, loving comments. And, oh yes, I plan to hold onto my wonderful Gary for   FOREVER  AND  A  DAY.

Best Wishes And Love To All,
Ethel

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7 posted 2002-10-10 04:23 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Ethel, this made me cry because it is sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, love like that is so rare nowadays and I am so happy you have found it! I sure hope he proposes to you soon as if I could I would love to try and come on your wedding day! (smiles) God Bless You Both, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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8 posted 2002-10-10 04:31 PM


Noah, thank you so very much for your sweet, heartfelt reply. You are such a good person, I can tell. Thanks for reading and leaving your reply. I appreciate your thoughts so much. And, oh yes, we are already engaged. But, like I said earlier, due to some circumstancs I won't mention now, we aren't married yet. We will be very soon, we hope. I am going to see him this weekend, though!!!!  Thank you.


Love To All,
Ethel/garysgirl

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9 posted 2002-10-11 01:17 AM


Nice thoughts on the road to forever...James
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10 posted 2002-10-11 01:34 AM


James, thank you so much for reading my poem and for replying to it. I appreciate it.


Love to All,
Ethel....garysgirl

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11 posted 2002-10-11 03:20 AM


You have a keeper then...does he have a brother? Someone who likes poetry and long walks in the moonlight along the beach or in the woods or on the top of a mountain and someone who truly has a sense of the ridiculous and a good grasp of English and the art of the long sentence? LOL

Enjoyed your poem..

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12 posted 2002-10-17 12:02 PM


PoetDevine...thanks so much for reading my poem and for your reply. I appreciate it. I've been reading your poetry on the main site for a long time...long before I joined here. I love your poetry. Thanks.
Love To All,
Ethel

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13 posted 2002-12-30 03:18 PM


some loves just can't be described
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14 posted 2003-08-02 05:54 PM


Fortunately, love does not have to be described and lived in just one day...it unfolds in beautiful layers...James
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