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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2002-10-05 10:37 AM





© Copyright 2002 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-10-05 10:40 AM


OOhh, such a comparison with nature, Karilea. Your words are beautiful as always. Thank you.

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2 posted 2002-10-05 10:53 AM


Lovely and that last line is a "Pow!"

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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3 posted 2002-10-06 10:02 AM


"for in your thunder, I am warm"!!
WOW!! OHMYGOSH!!  Love this Karilea!!
~Big smiles and a hug~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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4 posted 2002-10-06 10:15 AM


Shining One....I do like this one...perfect!
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5 posted 2002-10-06 10:16 AM


Kari, this was just such a sweet and beautiful read and just WONDERFUL!  HUGGSSS

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

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6 posted 2002-10-06 10:16 AM


This "Mizzle" has muzzled me!--I'm speechless!---and breathless!

Linda

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7 posted 2002-10-07 03:19 PM


I miss the drizzle,
but there's nothing to miss
in the soft heat
of these words.

*thunk*

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8 posted 2002-10-07 04:10 PM


"for in your thunder, I am warm"

I wish I'd written that line.  

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9 posted 2002-10-08 06:46 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I just love the soft caress of this poem, sweet friend, may the thunder of destiny always tremble in every heartbeat, this is gorgeous, we all loven you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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10 posted 2002-10-08 06:48 PM


I like this poem

Cold hands means a warm heart

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