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my lamentations are few
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my lamentations are few |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Truth is, I don’t have much to pitch a fit about though it might be fun to stomp my feet, fall limp to the floor dead weight against your hand and scream everyone would hear me and turn to see but you you would roll your eyes (knowing it would humor me) and walk away (knowing it would rouse me). Truth is, my lamentations are few my mistakes were festive while I was making them the consequences don’t readily come to mind. I doubt I was entitled to more so, I don’t have much to pitch a fit about least not tonight. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
why is it I can picture you throwing yourself on the ground just to make a scene for the sport of it and the reaction you'd get?!  enjoyed this Cowboy.....  |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Duncan, LOL I do like tihs. I found your typo. It is spelled a-r-o-u-s-e.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
That was very cute... I complain a lot. I am reading a book about complaining and guess what I complained about having to read it lol. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I will have whatever he having... TRY THIS ONE ANOTHER NIGHT!!!  just being an arse here (I really should come up with some new poetic devices) Hugs you...I'm trying here...sigh |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
So now you're pitching fits instead of horseshoes? LOL, and of course you did it just to get attention. Does this technique work for you? ROTFL as I picture you kicking and screaming and flailing about. You can be really naughty, yanno? UH, er, this is a challenge response? silly me, I thought you were having a hissy fit! [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (10-04-2002 02:03 AM).] |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I'm so misunderstood...lol. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
i understand you D, dammit, but i do! quote:you know, i've always wondered what my ex was doing with all her spare time... i know now she was spending it with you! *rolling eyes* seriously though, this whole stanza caught me, shook me, threw me on the floor, remembering it as if it were my own memory... wait, it is. geez. also - quote:wow. yup. 'nuff said. peace m'friend. C |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Dunc... Exactly my friend... exactly... love the perspective and the write... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I doubt I was entitled to more... there's a whole challenge just waiting in that one line... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan I'm with you on this one. What benefit is a fit It would only start a pendulum in the pit. Enjoyed. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I have plenty...wanna see my list?...good write |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
my mistakes were festive while I was making them the consequences don't readily come to mind. I doubt I was entitled to more so, I don't have much to pitch a fit about least not tonight. ===================================== I understand you...and adore the way your mind works....its always been your sincerety and humilty that stood out in your words. You know...that "cute puppy on the porch" thing ya got going on. lmao(pssst) (hey Trace...is he housebroke yet) |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Duncan You are mellow...I like that....and I think you laugh, even at yourself at times...also a good thing...so why complain? Enjoyed this! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Boy do I like this one!!! If you don't mind I'll giggle a bit longer Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hey, Duncan, I sure did relate to this one. With some of the "moods" I find myself in, I want to throw fits lots of times!! (Just ask Gary). But little ole me NEVER throws fits......Yeah, Right!! Thanks for sharing your own moods with us and for expressing them so well. Ethel/garysgirl |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Good one Duncan! I'd love to throw one sometimes..just pitch myself onto the floor and throw a hissy fit. Good stuff! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Tomorrow's always another day, Duncan! If the duncan fits, bear it!! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (dissolves into panic throwing a whinny baby fit!) I want more poem, now now now! LOL! (giggles in delight) This is cute and wonderfully said, sweet friend, really my lamentations are few though I do think we all have these moments, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Hey JM….house broke??? House broke my arse!!! Are you seeing these little hissy fit’s he’s throwing????? …Hey…wanna get his attention??? Roll yer eyes and walk away!!! ROFLMAO!!! You can never win or lose |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
ROTfL at your reply, Tracey. Poor Duncan. |
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