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Going home... and the rose she left behind
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Going home... and the rose she left behind |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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Going Home ~*~ Quiet is the sea, and the white clouds are hushed in the dawn. Ghostly is the sky, as fog clears a path for the sparkling sun. There, in the silken stream of gold a ships going home. A child waves goodbye, and the dolphins bow. Vanishing in the calm, is the rose she left behind. BloomingRose |
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Enceladus New Member
since 2002-10-03
Posts 3 |
I love the gentle quality of your imagery here, it lends the piece a sombre, yet touching, atmosphere. Nicely done! E. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Awwwww, this is sooooo beautiful, sweet friend, it brought a tear to my eye thinking how even while all animals look differently how so many can feel our own emotions too and the special smile shared between the girl and dolphin! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Debra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
The way you wrote this allowed me to have those images and enjoy them thank you I enjoyed this very much. Thomas |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Thank you much! Hugs, Deb |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BloomingRose~ This piece is so delicately done~ You're wonderful at lacing beautiful thoughts together .... a *sigh* of lovely~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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