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Night Shadow
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since 2002-08-04
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0 posted 2002-08-19 12:26 PM



1st day day left,
Left from my life,
Life is you,
You are my Heart,
Heart is full of love,
Love of you,
You are me , and me are you,
Waiting..Waiting..& Waiting!!

Night Shadow

© Copyright 2002 Night Shadow - All Rights Reserved
VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
1 posted 2002-08-19 12:43 PM


very enigmatic for this reader, but the rhythm and repitition is intriguing.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Night Shadow
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Posts 41

2 posted 2002-08-19 12:51 PM


Thanx VAS for ur opinion, i really care about it.

Night Shadow

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2002-08-19 01:14 PM


interesting little ditty. cute but sad and full of longing...
Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
4 posted 2002-08-19 01:43 PM


Night Shadow - me hopes the wait is not long. Best to you...

BC

Night Shadow
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since 2002-08-04
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5 posted 2002-08-19 03:26 PM


Dear Passing Shadows,
Thanx for ur replay and hope to see u later.

Bill Charles,
Thanx for ur replay also, about waiting im sure that it will not keep so long , take care.

Night Shadow


Night Shadow
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6 posted 2002-08-19 03:29 PM


Dear Passing Shadows,
Thanx for ur replay and hope to see u later.

Bill Charles,
Thanx for ur replay also, about waiting im sure that it will not keep so long , take care.

Night Shadow

secretlife
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since 2002-07-30
Posts 359
Grean Earth ,,,
7 posted 2002-08-19 11:51 PM


Why you are sure that u will not keep waiting so long????????

(Poor my samy)

passing shadows
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8 posted 2002-08-20 04:10 AM


um.... ....are you really close enough to be able to see me later?
Night Shadow
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9 posted 2002-08-20 04:28 AM


Sweet Secret!!
So u wanna know why im sure, ok cuz at the worse case my waiting will finish after 6 days, Got it (^_*).

Night Shadow

Night Shadow
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10 posted 2002-08-20 04:31 AM


Dear passing shadows,
maybe im close enough by thinking but so far away buy distance ,

Night Shadow

passing shadows
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11 posted 2002-08-21 07:29 AM


boot it up again!
Night Shadow
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12 posted 2002-08-21 12:03 PM


looooooooool thanx passing shadows
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