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Tommysgirl03
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since 2002-09-21
Posts 35


0 posted 2002-09-23 06:44 PM


I go to bed,
and then I get up.
I can't seem to get
you out of my head,
how I long for your touch.

I think about things
we've talked about, how
so many things are
troubling you. I wish I could help,
I sit and think about what
I can do.

I hate to see you always
so tired. I hate to think
no one appreciates the kind things
that you do.(it's just a figure
of speech, don't let it get to you)

It's not often that I tell you,
what a wonderful job you do,
so let me say,"Job well done,
I stand to Applaud You."

© Copyright 2002 Tommysgirl03 - All Rights Reserved
Miah
Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062
Pennsylvania
1 posted 2002-09-23 08:07 PM


enjoyable read.
the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2002-09-23 11:35 PM


I defiently enjoyed this read

Cold hands means a warm heart

Krishankins
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Senior Member
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972
Texas
3 posted 2002-09-23 11:43 PM


warm thoughts. I, too, enjoyed this one!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

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