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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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0 posted 2002-09-19 05:00 PM


She might be like me
she might walk like me
she might look like me
You might even think that she loves you like me
But when you kiss her
her kisses will not stir your passion
and when you make love to her
she will respond to you like me
she will never love you like me
she's not me



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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-09-19 05:07 PM


A lot of truth to this one. Awesome write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

vandana
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2 posted 2002-09-19 05:08 PM


enjoyed
Kielo
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since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109

3 posted 2002-09-19 05:34 PM


This was beautiful.

Kielo

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455

4 posted 2002-09-19 05:39 PM


There's only one you, walker.  Good to see ya back!
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