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Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2002-09-18 12:07 PM

Her dimpled smile hides love's beguile,
...as draws me to her arms,
This creature fair with ebon hair,
...who tempts with her charms,
An evening star came from afar,
...crown jewel of summer's night,
Angelic grace as we embrace,
...in glow of Luna's light,
Fingers tracing, heartbeats racing,
...seeking to unveil,
Her inner fire, my heart's desire,
...as to the stars we sail,
I kiss her brow, to her avow,
...I shall your vassal be,
Forevermore fair Terpsichore,
...Whil'st sail on welkin's sea,
My goal fair Rose? my heart's disclose,
...mortal love and nothing more,
Within thy breast, my lover's quest,
...I'll love thee evermore.

Miah
Senior Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 1062
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2002-09-18 01:08 AM

Tim, that was just beautiful.

CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

2 posted 2002-09-18 01:57 AM

ahhhhh very romantic and well done
enjoyed

Cher

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2002-09-18 04:02 AM

every now and then? I just claim something for ME...and insist that I be indulged in my delusions...this is one of those times...

how else would you know that THIS is one of my favorite things?

I kiss her brow, to her avow,
...I shall your vassal be,
Forevermore fair Terpsichore...

(grinning at me...I just read that three times more after pasting and found myself stroking my neck and smiling...er...that's a compliment!

)

ooooh...chivalry is NOT dead...I need to re-count the head(s)! lol and winks m'lovely poetic justice.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2002-09-18 07:06 AM

I feel as though I have been eavesdropping...
so I shall simply
tiptoe
away

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

5 posted 2002-09-18 07:09 AM

Tim,
now I have a desire to put on my gown of beaded satin with the bell sleeves and dance the night away.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

smitty-j
Member

since 2002-09-13

Posts 72
Florida, USA

6 posted 2002-09-18 11:50 AM

Fingers tracing, heartbeats racing,
...seeking to unveil,
Her inner fire, my heart's desire,
...as to the stars we sail,

wow...be still my heart....yummy (^_~)
J

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2002-09-18 11:56 AM

Tim,
Beautiful flow in a good write makes for a good read, enjoyed.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2002-09-18 12:12 PM

Tim

You beguile the reader with your words so beautiful.

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