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Feel Of You....
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Feel Of You.... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Laughter lapping against the cliffs of hang in echo of trysts enjoyed and touches left in the sand of flow as waves crest and fall in mimic of love shared... Follow the winds as breezes flow over the eyes in dream Trace the beauty of yourself in my heart’s cavern. Touch the depths of me as each tip grazes my feel. Linger upon the height of passions as sensual sights come within the view of golden light shed Call out, listen to the sound of your own heart’s question. Answer only with the tightening grasp, the lingering kiss.. As I say again, over and over, with each crest....each rise....the feel of you.... washing over me.... over us.... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hey! Who said you could be so good at free verse? |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sun....silly woman....you did....and I am just trying to prove you are right!!!! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Hey, no fair! When I was writing my "Goin' on a Zero Hunt," this poem had a zero after it, then before I got to it, it had a 2 by it. No matter, I was determined to read it anyway, and it's easy to see why it got a comment immediately. btw, wipe that smile off your face, I'm blushing. Truth? As I was reading, I thought, "too bad he's spending time writing about such sensuousness on a Saturday morning. Then I looked at that smile and I thought,  perhaps it's a bit of reflection rather than fantasy.Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
OH GOSH.....Virginia...you have got me rolling.....reflection...no, maybe just a dream.....at my age....dreams are nice too.....even if only a poem..... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssss) Oh Barry, I just love how this free-flows too, sweet friend, your inspiration always takes us to the caverns of your heart and beyond, I love it! (smiles) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Call out, listen to the sound of your own heart’s question. Answer ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The whole write was beautiful... but these lines hit me |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Barry This was truly beautiful with such amazing images. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Barry if this is a dream, then dream on. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Wow Barry, free verse...you must be dabbling in styles and stuff...very different, and i love it! (course, I love whatever you write) |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
A dreamy free verse indeed. |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
1derful free verse Magnus. Enjoyed. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
All I have for you today is one more sigh... Sandra |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Call out, listen to the sound of your own heart’s question. Answer only with the tightening grasp, the lingering kiss.. Oh my!! Well done sensual piece. ChrisLife is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Magnus I am just getting to read your works hope I don't miss any of them I like your style. Thomas |
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