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Pilgrimage
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0 posted 2002-09-10 04:13 PM



Hyenas

“I wept to hear her speak of wild revenge!
So deep a sadness, and so fine a woe.
How could someone so sweet let evil in?
How far will rage and madness make her go?”

“My love, don’t fret, for Mother keeps you safe,”
she smiled, and blinked away a tear (for show).
She took his cultured hands, began to chafe,
“With stocks and bonds, she’s helpless, don’t you know?”

“Our lawyers deal with her kind all the time-
they get the upper hand, they start to crow.
But throw a little cash their way, you’ll find
how happily they take it and just go.”

Hyenas will protect their tender cubs.
Are kindred spirits found in trendy clubs?

Nan(Pilgrim variety)

© Copyright 2002 Nancy Wilcox - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-09-10 04:18 PM


This was cool. I loved it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Pilgrimage
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2 posted 2002-09-10 04:21 PM


Thanks, loner!

Nan(Pilgrim variety)

VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
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3 posted 2002-09-10 04:57 PM


oooh, quite a metaphor

those creatures laugh and yet they hold a wicked grin and a very mean dispostion

you know, they'd make a good rendition of that pitchfork carrying red-horned guy

certainly can't trust him any distance at all

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Madame Chipmunk
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4 posted 2002-09-10 05:07 PM


Swans are like that also, Nan...
They look beautiful, but they are extremely mean...
A great poem here...
~  sincerest hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Pilgrimage
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5 posted 2002-09-10 10:17 PM


VAS, I wouldn't trust the four-legged kind, and the two-legged ones are slyer!

Lyra, I didn't know that about swans. They're so elegant and serene-looking, I should have guessed.

Nan(Pilgrim variety)

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