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bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

0 posted 2002-09-09 02:59 PM

If that bright drop
signified your eyes,
through the blackness of time
we would be all right.
To know your gaze again,
to watch their color flare.
It brings me to decision
that I need to be there.
Oh, to know where they do train
upon the night's black felt.
I will be your snow, dear Lori.
Let's make Polaris melt.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2002-09-09 03:04 PM

I don't know if Polaris will melt, but I know I certainly am!

Earth Angel

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

2 posted 2002-09-09 03:05 PM

Thanks, Linda. I'm focusing my energy on moving to Calgary, to be full-time close to Lori (Anvrill on PIP). I guess this poem reflected that.

Mikey

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

3 posted 2002-09-09 03:19 PM

This is Awesome, Mikey!

On to Calgary!

*smiles*
~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

Pell
Member

since 2001-09-16

Posts 134
Pacific NW

4 posted 2002-09-09 03:25 PM

wow, so romaaaantic! I don`t know about Lori, but after reading, I`m a puddle!

A very sweet write.

Best wishes to you both.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

5 posted 2002-09-09 03:31 PM

Tiersdin,
Thanks for your well wishes.

Pell,
Thank you.

Mike

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

6 posted 2002-09-09 03:31 PM

I bet you are a very sweet man, Mr.Squirrel... and Lori is one lucky lady.
This is a beautiful write, thanks for sharing it with us.

~ furry rodent hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

7 posted 2002-09-09 03:33 PM

Thank you, Lyra. I'm going to FedEx you some more acorns for that!

Squirrel

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2002-09-09 03:44 PM

Awww Mikey....this is so sweet...
And I know, you and Lori will melt
all the igloos in Calgary!

~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

9 posted 2002-09-09 03:46 PM

Nancy,
If nothing else,
maybe I'll knock off
some cowboy hats.

.m.

Magicmystery
Senior Member

since 2002-02-13

Posts 821
Windsor, Ontario, Canada

10 posted 2002-09-09 04:38 PM

Definately a star to set your compass by.... a guiding light for your travels and as you move toward your goal, you definately need this star to guide your steps.... good luck with your move.

Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow.
But above all... be kind to yourself today.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

11 posted 2002-09-09 06:04 PM

(sigh) Oh my gosh, this is sooooo sensually romantic, sweet friend, your poetry always makes anything feel possible that seems so surreal, I love it, God Bless You and Lori, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

12 posted 2002-09-09 06:49 PM

awww sorry thats as far as my mentality and comments go at this moment..cursed headache...

Kristen

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

13 posted 2002-09-09 10:09 PM

I have two words for you.

SNOW
SHOES

(and my very best)

~Ed

In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".

~wranx~

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

14 posted 2002-09-09 10:39 PM

Thanks everyone. And wranx,

Mikey

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

15 posted 2002-09-10 12:04 PM

Truly romantic, Mike!! I love this one!!
VERY strong!!!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

16 posted 2002-09-10 12:05 PM

I like romantic. Good work

Cold hands means a warm heart

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

17 posted 2002-09-10 12:23 PM

Y'alls love makes me smile! Canada looks good on you, Mike.

[This message has been edited by Duncan (09-10-2002 12:26 AM).]

geenabee
Member

since 2002-09-10

Posts 59
NC--USA

18 posted 2002-09-10 02:06 AM

Dear Mike,
don't know you but boy she sounds like a lucky gal!
better live up to these poetic posturings!
chuckle
really nice imagery and wow what a way with words

nice ta read ya
geenabee

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

19 posted 2002-09-10 12:00 PM

Thanks, all.

Mike

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