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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2002-09-09 02:15 PM




Gather all the people to your way
hurry, don't get left behind today
you're wishing for the moon
wake up the dream is ending soon
stand up and be counted come what may

The sun is setting capture it's last glow
the stars are asking questions you don't know
confusion lays it's claim
and nothing ever stays the same
shout your inner secrets before you go

Untie your hands be free of all the pain
Undress yourself before you go insane
Who will take your heart,
when the world falls all apart?
make sure they remember both your names

What am I doing here?
Why are you so full of scare?
What makes this heavy world go 'round?
why am I a clown?
the earth is moving fast
before you know your time is past
walls of silence will come tumbling down

make history today,
come what may...

nothing more to say,
let come what may...

~Tier
9/9/02

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-09-09 02:16 PM


A lot of truth in this

Cold hands means a warm heart

Madame Chipmunk
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2 posted 2002-09-09 02:20 PM


the earth is moving fast
before you know your time is past
walls of silence will come tumbling down

I love these lines, Tier...
They seem to tingle with universal truths
~ chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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3 posted 2002-09-09 02:21 PM




(smiles) Oh my gosh, I love how you said this, become what may, I love it, may we all stand our ground and approach our ambitions with fervor and hope! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tiersdin, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-09-09 02:25 PM


Very nicely done Tier~
~hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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5 posted 2002-09-09 02:30 PM


A good principle to follow

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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6 posted 2002-09-09 02:30 PM


wisdom shines brightly here
Tiersdin
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7 posted 2002-09-09 02:33 PM


Thank you all so much!  *group *

you've made my day,

*smiles*
~tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

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8 posted 2002-09-09 02:43 PM


There's a resignation in the title,
but a triumph in the words, Tier.

Mikey

Tiersdin
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9 posted 2002-09-09 02:48 PM


Thanks Mikey...

it's a song really.

*smiles*
~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

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10 posted 2002-09-09 09:36 PM


You're back here in a big way Tier. Happy to be readin' ya again.

This song of yours is a whirwind.

~Ed

In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".      

~wranx~

Tiersdin
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11 posted 2002-09-09 10:27 PM


Awww... Thanks Ed...

*smiles*
~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

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12 posted 2002-09-10 09:19 AM


And let what may, always be.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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13 posted 2002-09-10 09:24 AM


"undress yourself before you go insane..."

You've hit the nail on the head with that line! ----and by writing and spilling out your pains and frustrations like this(undressing yourself)---you'll never go insane!---at least, I hope not! I wouldn't want anything to interfere with your writing words of wisdom!

Earth Angel

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14 posted 2002-09-10 09:43 AM


Enjoyed the read, and if this is a sample of insanity we should all go insane. (time for a Jimmy Buffet song?)
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15 posted 2002-09-10 05:23 PM


enjoyed
Tiersdin
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16 posted 2002-09-10 05:34 PM


Thank you, Moonlight Romeo, Earth Angel, Midnite Sun, and Verdana...

Group



*smiles*
~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

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