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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-09-09 12:57 PM



Purrrfectly Innocent

let me in, meowwwww...
I want to stray with you
yarn into the night
tangle and weave together
moments of play
roam the darkness
coverlet hide
sounds of the purrrfect one
held at my bay

tones of the under
a temptress, I be
padding my hopes
on a purrrfectly He
shedding for no one
but covers lay bared
for night is in tempting
what day's end holds shared

Purrrfectly innocent
meowwwwwing am I
turning rings around Saturn
and mourning his cry...
to be warmed by his heartbeat
to render in time
I sweeten the taste
sugarcoating in rhyme.


*Sugarthoughts for Saturn

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2002 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2002-09-09 01:06 AM


"I want to stray with you
yarn into the night
tangle and weave together
moments of play
roam the darkness"

What fun! I love it! Please spin a sequel.

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
2 posted 2002-09-09 01:32 AM


There's so much here to curl up against and get comfortable in.  You be the cats meow Maureen!!!  
Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
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Charlotte, NC
3 posted 2002-09-09 01:44 AM


M,

i loved this...you had a lot of fun
with your words in this write and it
shows...thanks for the smile so late at
night, lovely way to end my day.

take care
amy

"if irish eyes are smiling...they are probably up to something" :)

Professor Gloom
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of Depression
4 posted 2002-09-09 09:01 AM


Pretty kitty Kat
Why do you do all of that?
Pouncing my dreaming
With all your scheming
All night through you want to play
Then you sleep all day.

Innocent you’ll play
Attacks movement in dreaming,
Naughty kitty Kat

Saturn running rings
Mischievous little thing
Exploring somewhere
He should not be there
What can you do about that
Silly kitty Kat.

Gloom
The only way my cat would be sweet
if he spilt sugar all over himself,
shhhhhh, I best not give him any ideas
or I will have a sugarcoated cat.


Cute write

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2002-09-09 09:49 AM


"to be warmed by his heartbeat", imparts a whole lotta lovin' between you and your wonderful feline friend!

I'm enjoying this warm fuzzy feeling I've gotten from reading this poem. Thank you!

Earth Angel

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Deep in the heart
6 posted 2002-09-09 10:04 AM


This is wonderful, but no cat is perfectly innocent

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

VAS
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since 2000-11-16
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Oregon
7 posted 2002-09-09 10:12 AM


supuuuuuuuuuuurrrrrbly done!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23
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On A Journey To The Unknown
8 posted 2002-09-09 12:12 PM


I have a big thick book with nothing but cat poems in it. I really like this poem.
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