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D.Lester Young
Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2002-09-07 08:38 PM


In explosive verse
Exploding so traumatically
In a contemplative sky
Sending bursts of energy
From within the mind
Intermingling within powerful words

In splendid arrangements
You orchestrate the interpretations
In vivid displays of tempestuous moves
Each carrying its level of awareness
In ever higher magnitudes
Ending in a crescendo of climatic perfection

Drained in the exhilaration
Of a beautiful read
The hunger within the mind
Being temporarily fulfilled
Within highlighted thoughts

That is
Until the next firecracker poet
Lights the fuse
To take the mind to a different level
Creating their own special show  

D.Lester Young (08/04/02)
Tuscaloosa, AL
Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry)

© Copyright 2002 David Lester Young - All Rights Reserved
WhiteRose
Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
1 posted 2002-09-07 08:46 PM


That is
Until the next firecracker poet
Lights the fuse
To take the mind to a different level
Creating their own special show  

I love your poetry. It's filled with intelligence and an insight that is incredible.  

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (09-07-2002 08:47 PM).]

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
2 posted 2002-09-07 08:56 PM


Thunderous applaus. Liked this very much.
ThisDiamond

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2002-09-08 12:40 PM


"To take mind to a different level"----and that is what you have just done for me!

Linda

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
4 posted 2002-09-08 09:19 PM


Enjoyed this read

Cold hands means a warm heart

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