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secretlife
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since 2002-07-30
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0 posted 2002-09-07 03:41 AM




What a gloomy life….
No understanding between each other….
Ignoring the emotions…..
Limited freedom…..
Like a bird who cant get his freedom….
A bird that wishes he can fly
in the blue sky…..
Holding with him his freedom….
Soaring freely…emigrant to the place
that he can get the tranquility….

What a gloomy life….
Hurting each other with no attention…
petrified hearts…. Like a hard black rock….

What a gloomy life…
Hates were spread in every single hearts…
The heart that filled
with love  parentless…

It’s difficult to live
While you are suffering….
While you are keeping silent….
While you are wronged…

Being there… being here
it’s the same….
If you realize that
you are the only one
who can feel...
What a gloomy life………
Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)
                                                      


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Member Patricius
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just out of reach
1 posted 2002-09-07 09:43 AM


Well, as my husband always says,"it could be worse." He's usually right, and I have to center myself and count my blessings. Smile.....it can't hurt. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

WhiteRose
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2 posted 2002-09-07 09:53 AM


Very nicely written and what a gloomy life indeed.
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3 posted 2002-09-07 01:31 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Yes, I know how your heart must ache but know it can be much worse and you truly are blessed as love and joy will always find a way! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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