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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-09-06 02:25 PM


How best to show my love
Your desires must be fulfilled
Only you can hone my skills

As my fingers explore
Your sighs guide them
Your desires must be fulfilled

My lips brush upon your skin
The fires burn higher and hotter
Your sighs guide them

Exploring your topography
Peaks of rises and soft of valleys
The fires burn higher and hotter

Merging of mutual desires
Needing to know
Peaks of rises and soft of valleys

This love revels in the
Needing to know
How best to show my love
Only you can hone my skills

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2002 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
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just out of reach
1 posted 2002-09-06 02:30 PM


Hmmm...the temperature just went up a few degrees here!! Interloper, this is truly a rare, and sensual piece of work. Lovely. Chris   Library bound!!

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

anya
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2 posted 2002-09-06 02:34 PM


yeah this was truely sensual, I am very glad that you reposted it!
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3 posted 2002-09-06 02:37 PM




(smiles) Awwwwww, I love this, and may your love always be the compass rose that shows you all the beautiful isles in topography of destiny and may you spend eternity on a lifetime honeymoon! (sigh) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2002-09-06 03:12 PM


Yes, indeed, "The fires burn higher and hotter"----excuse me, I have to go fetch my fan---I'm getting the vapours!

Linda

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5 posted 2002-09-06 04:16 PM


The temperature sure rose a few degrees up here in Canada!!
Dang!!  You're so good!
*Get out the big stetson!*
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
6 posted 2002-09-06 06:37 PM


beautiful
Marsha
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7 posted 2002-09-06 10:23 PM


Bob darling man this is utterly utterly wonderful When I think you have reached the peak of your perfection you then write something that is so perfect and full of beauty I find myself saying this is incredible. Yet again I’m scampering in here late and tardy, do you miss me when my visits are a little erratic as they are right now. I’m so busy organising things for our visit to Florida that I’ve barely got time to ummmmm sneeze. But I try to get in here for the refreshment of my soul, and to answer you. It is always worth while seeking you out darling heart, and this is exquisite writing, thank you for re=posting it



Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

ThisDiamond
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8 posted 2002-09-06 10:37 PM


Enjoyed the lesson...thanks for the treat.
ThisDiamond

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