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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23

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somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-09-06 10:20 AM

Struggle with canvas
the minds eye seen through brush stroke
pain of birthing art.

WhiteRose

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (09-06-2002 10:37 AM).]

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2002-09-06 10:24 AM

This is GR8!
I think this is, however, a Senryu

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2002-09-06 10:25 AM

Oh, this is wonderful. I have an artist friend who would nod in full agreement with your words. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Krishankins

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since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

3 posted 2002-09-06 10:27 AM

I'm no stranger to this feeling. Creating art is an art in itself. Nice thoughts!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

4 posted 2002-09-06 10:28 AM

Interloper,

hmmmmmm...looked it up to make sure. And I think you're right. Only in the fact I suppose this could be considered ironic or satirical? I'm not ashamed to say I am completely confused now. I know the definition for haiku said, "usually refers to seasons or nature in some way, but not always". Unconfuse me please

I saw an "oops". Fixed it. The power of edit.

Thank you Kris and Chris

for your replies.

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (09-06-2002 10:39 AM).]

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2002-09-06 10:28 AM

You just had to know, I'd take a looksee at this poem----Art, Haiku, WhiteRose!!!Grabbed my interest right away!---and I wasn't disappointed! Believe me, I've been there!

Linda

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

6 posted 2002-09-06 10:34 AM

Thank you Linda, Your replies are always so wonderfully uplifting. I'm glad you enjoyed my attempt at a haiku. I used a subject I was familiar with.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-09-06 03:40 PM

(smiles) Oh Anne, I love this, this is a beautiful senryu and though it may hur tto think at first, the end result of a masterpiece is always heavenly! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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