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WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-09-06 12:30 PM


Dixie made me do it, I swear   But man, did this feel good!!


So you're gone now
boo hoo
I'm not crying
over you.

No don't call me
for tea,

don't wanna
see a movie.

Cry on your shoulder?
come on, it's over!

Friends?
you must be ill

yeah friends
right up until

some other honey
comes along

sings her sweet
siren song

then it's to the curb again
left with a bruised rear-end.

No way
not today

it's over
on your way! damn I'm evil sometimes

WhiteRose

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (09-06-2002 12:35 AM).]

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Krishankins
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1 posted 2002-09-06 01:09 AM


This isn't evil at all! I love it! It SCREAMS of self preservation and respect!! YOU GO GIRL!!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2002-09-06 05:46 AM


Fantastic expression...my thoughts exactly...James
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2002-09-06 01:48 PM


I like this "In your face" write. Gets all the crap out of your system! Our sweet rose of white, has washed off the last vestiges of manure! hehe

Dixie did both you, and your readers, a favour!

Take Care
Linda

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
4 posted 2002-09-06 01:49 PM


This is cool. I know how this is.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Interloper
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Deep in the heart
5 posted 2002-09-06 01:53 PM


Ya gotta do what ya gotta do.  Besides, he doesn't deserve you anyway

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Madame Chipmunk
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Michigan
6 posted 2002-09-06 01:55 PM


Good for you, Anne... Give him a swift kick on the you know what and then wash your hands of him... and don't ever look back.
Don't ever let thoughts of him soil your life again...
You Go Girl............
~ loving hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise
7 posted 2002-09-06 02:13 PM


Bravo! You go girl! I loved this ..saying it straight isn't evil .It is standing up for what is right against what isn't..It is not enabling the guy to abuse your emotions...way cool so let's hear it when it is needed..yeah it feels great and hugs and more hugs to you, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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8 posted 2002-09-06 03:32 PM




(giggles in delight) No, you're not evil, its just that some people just can't understand us and if they only hurt us it is hard to accept them as friends, though we can forgive them! (sigh) This is wonderfully said, sweet friend, I love this side of you too, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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