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WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-09-05 09:32 PM



Have you ever touched a spirit
communed with another's soul
felt without that person
you would not be whole?

Missed the very space
this person occupied
felt when they left
a part of you had died?

Been captured by their mind
shared their hopes and dreams
have you felt real pain
from this persons screams?

Well then you must know
what it's like to love someone
what would happen if they left
and you had come undone.

It's a void all encompassing
a darkness so real
a night never ending
that you can literally feel.

WhiteRose

"I can't stay on your life support, there's a shortage in the switch"~~Pink

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
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1 posted 2002-09-05 10:25 PM


yes, mourning is all that.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2002-09-05 11:03 PM


yes, I have once, and will never again. Very expressive and a good reminder of how it felt.
Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-09-05 11:42 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Anne, though I haven't ever felt it I could never imagine losing Joanna as she means the world to me! (sigh) This is powerfully heartaching but true, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-05-2002 11:42 PM).]

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