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Rodney Belcher
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Taylor, Michigan

0 posted 2002-09-05 10:51 AM


Was it ever there
Was it all a joke
Played on my heart
To take what you needed
To make you feel special
Was there any realness
To your “love”
A piece of sincerity
In an insincere bonding
You say you hurt
But the hurt never showed
You say you cry
But the tears never flowed
Maybe you’ll care
When you look back and realize
that the need you seek
Was here, all along

Nothing ever happens unless first a Dream - Rod

© Copyright 2002 Rodney Belcher - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2002-09-05 11:07 AM


As the saying goes,"Sometimes you don't appreciate someone, until they're gone."

--This may well apply to her! Very moving piece of writing.

Linda

Magicmystery
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since 2002-02-13
Posts 821
Windsor, Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2002-09-05 12:19 PM


How true.  I have felt this way...and Earth Angel is right... some people are never appreciated for how special you are till they are gone. If it is any consolation, anyone who doesn't love you, see you for the irreplaceible, special person you are does not deserve your efforts.  Don't waste your time and energy looking back.

Lots of getting over it healing (((hugs)))

Sherry

Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow.
But above all... be kind to yourself today.

[This message has been edited by Magicmystery (09-05-2002 12:22 PM).]

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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2002-09-05 12:32 PM


Interesting write.  
Sometimes one doesn't miss the well 'til it goes dry

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
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4 posted 2002-09-05 10:12 PM


A piece of sincerity
In an insincere bonding

Yes, sometimes it takes losing what we needed to realize we needed it. Nicely done.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2002-09-05 10:18 PM


Waving a hand across the border from Windsor
and saying, Great Write!!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Rodney Belcher
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since 2000-06-06
Posts 227
Taylor, Michigan
6 posted 2002-09-05 10:27 PM


Why thank you neighbor! The one thing that can be said about pain is that we usually turn it around and learn from it. It sometimes takes more time than is comfortable...but in the end the lesson is worth it! God Bless you all and thank you for the kind words!

Nothing ever happens unless first a Dream - Rod

passing shadows
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7 posted 2002-09-05 11:09 PM


definately a great truth here...I enjoyed this
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