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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-09-05 12:10 PM



While love sang to me
was I gone missing?

Deaf in the world
of spoken feelings,

still reeling
as tainted was
my heart.

I'm not sure.

I heard a whispered phrase.

A note caressed ear,
but heart of loss
turned away.

Now,
within the hush
of forgetfulness,
I'll listen.

Please,
sing to me again.

WhiteRose



The White Rose~
A simple expression
of classic beauty.


[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (09-05-2002 12:31 AM).]

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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-09-05 12:12 PM


Romantic

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-09-06 03:49 PM




Yay!!! Just doing my daily bump-ercises!!! (smiles) This is a beautifully romantic piece that whispers, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

CSKpoet
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since 2002-07-12
Posts 845
Island in Paradise
3 posted 2002-09-06 03:52 PM


lovely..

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2002-09-08 06:45 PM


Yes may love sing a beautiful love song to you...James
Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296
Michigan
5 posted 2002-09-08 07:51 PM


Your heart has ears, Anne...
and your pen writes with talent
~ hugs from your chipmunk friend

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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