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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2002-09-04 05:02 PM

It is softness of light
that from morning shine drapes
across your bare legs as you lie
tangled in sheets that like a toga
cover your nakedness
but with a shrug you could slide aside
to reveal more
should the mood strike you
or the softness draped on your legs
become warm enough
to light the fires in your center

I would touch you
but the disturbance might indeed
shatter the brittle moment
so transparent that I can feel you breathe
as chest rises and falls
though I am standing here
beside your bed
not lying in it
as I wish

It is the softness
I long for

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2002-09-04 05:08 PM

Cpat

Sometimes morning can be heartbreaking and still so tender. Beautifully written! Good to see you posting..you've been missed!

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

2 posted 2002-09-04 05:10 PM

Cpat,

A happy moment,
tinged with reflection
and the fact of its own
ephemerality.

Awesome!

Mike

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-09-04 05:13 PM

Exquisitely, softly, beautifully penned...
YOU poet sir have been sincerely missed.
~Welcome back hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2002-09-04 05:25 PM

"tangled in sheets that like a toga"

clicking my sandals together three times:

"There's no place like Rome...
There's no place like Rome..."

sigh...still not THERE.

This is like rain after a drought, Ron.

Thank you.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2002-09-04 05:29 PM

...and it is this very style that has been
so missed....

welcome home, Cap'n!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-09-04 07:58 PM

(smiles) Oh Ron, as always your beautiful words flow with a gentle sensuality and sentiments, I love it, this is excellent, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2002-09-05 09:23 AM

cpat, ya know, I'm beginning to think you are in love. This is beautiful.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

8 posted 2002-09-05 12:49 PM

Ron, this is just one more pearl on the valuable necklace of your work.
Lovely!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

9 posted 2002-09-05 07:34 PM

As I read on, I almost stopped breathing!---literally!

Phenomenally sensitive and loving--and somewhat wistful.

Linda

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

10 posted 2002-09-12 09:28 AM

*Double Sighs*

~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

11 posted 2002-09-12 09:30 AM

*soft sigh* Beautiful!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

12 posted 2002-09-12 10:34 AM

Morning light drapes me,
and I dream of being entangled
in your soft thoughts.

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