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Open Poetry #22

When Love Was New

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-09-03 10:26 AM

When love was new
upon my heart

as morning dew
upon the rose

petals glistening
in suns glory

a sparkle
there inside

where the dark of loss
hid within shadow,
my desire
of touch,

I was nurtured
with light
and rain

new love began

sweet heart
of want
blossomed

and grew
to love you.

WhiteRose

The White Rose~
A simple expression
of classic beauty.

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (09-03-2002 10:27 AM).]

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

1 posted 2002-09-03 11:01 AM

oooh ooh very nice, someone special should especially enjoy this one

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

2 posted 2002-09-03 11:02 AM

I was nurtured
with light
and rain

...

I like the idea a lot... thanks for sharing...

regards,
sudhir

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2002-09-03 11:10 AM

Economy of words producing a wealth of thought.

Linda

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2002-09-03 06:42 PM

Delicious...James

maggie
Junior Member

since 2002-08-30

Posts 15

5 posted 2002-09-03 07:52 PM

This is nice, straight to the point. I would think everyone can relate to your poem.
Maggie xx

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