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vandana
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0 posted 2002-08-15 04:30 PM


When you had left me
Left me
And gone without me
When I am alone
Listening to our song
At the time
We used sing it together
Now
It's like a only a memory
Memory on my mind
When I miss you
I just sing this song
But I cry
When I hear
I try to let it out
flowing
from my heart
When I miss you
I cried
at night
Wishing you were
to hold me tight
When I think of those days
It 's brings me sorrow
Knowing
you will never come to me tomorrow
When I miss you
I miss you so much
So much
It hurts me sometimes
When I miss you.....


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Neeraja
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1 posted 2002-08-15 04:51 PM


I know what you feel... missing someone is so hard...



Neeraja

haydenjames
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2 posted 2002-08-15 05:20 PM


down worry the angels will comfort you.

My poetry is at:  http://www.thehayden.org

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2002-08-15 06:31 PM


Yes missing someone hurts very much and you captured this feeling well.  Well done.

somebody tell me, please help me....
understand.......(as sung by Trace Adkins)

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me

Sunshine
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4 posted 2002-08-15 06:50 PM



Vandana, these scattered thoughts are
very much like the fall leaves that will
soon sift about us...

reminiscing, reminiscing...

Enchantress
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5 posted 2002-08-15 07:22 PM


Vandana...but memories can also be a good thing..
when the pain subsides.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2002-08-15 07:25 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Vandana, I know these feelings so very well, this is sad but I know soon love will find your way again as you are destined to be happy always! (sigh) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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7 posted 2002-09-06 09:02 AM


I know, it's hard not to miss someone when they are gone, and even harder not to hurt when you are missing someone
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