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looking Through The Years |
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ambermize Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 157California 
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 LOOKING THROUGH THE YEARS I look at you- a path well worn, A stubborn nature- since you were born, A past that brings out my deepest fears, Remembering all the pain through the years, ~That only you could soothe~ I look at myself, immaturity dwells, Still deep inside a silent hell, ~Everytime you cry~ I wish for the laughter in your eyes, Filled with little girl promise, And sweet surprise, But were not children anymore. Looking into our past, I clung to you, Because you were my stability, I was the ignorance that you missed, So in turn you cherished me, A bond forever, never broken. Looking at you now, so calm inside yourself, Only I know the things you've felt, (That broke our hearts a thousand times) Growing- to learn that promises- Become well kept lies, ~But no ones making promises anymore~ Looking at the future, staring silently, I'm still not perfect, but you love me, You're still not rich- but to my heart, Which was expected from the start. No falling expectations in each other. Looking back at this world, Long after my days, Remembering little girls, Playing silent games, But all the games are over. Growing together intertwined, Often "love" has left us blind, But seeing never meant believing, On each other forever leaning, When there was no right path to choose. Finding in each other, Too many pasts and realities, That have both been lived too many times, Still our hearts claim to be fine, Because they're not allowed to break again. Crying to you, in nights unsure, When I didn't know either of us anymore, I longed for the fairytales, But happy endings were found nowhere, Because make-believe was never real. I find you now, Still in my life, But different somehow, Just remember I'll always love you. LOVE ALWAYS AND FOREVER, YOUR BABY SISTER. 7-15-98 (some hard years for us huh tanny??)  [This message has been edited by ambermize (06-26-2002 07:47 PM).] |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You don't know how many nights I thank God for such a perfect sister Ambs... *yeah..that's you*  we may not be perfect, but we've always stuck together...and I know we always will... You mean more to me than you will ever ever know Ambs... I love you lil sis!! Tanya Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
*sobbing* Beautiful write, Ambs... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  YAY!!! Oh Amber, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your love for your sister shines in these wonderful poem,s weet friend, we are all so blessed to have both of you hear and sharing your wonderful sisterly poetry to us all! (kiss on cheek) I love the picture you posted, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amber, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
It's great that you two are so close. I am in the process of writing such a piece for all of my sisters (four). Wonderfully done Kris your 100grit love is smoothing my soul |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
AmberSweetie~ 'I'm still not perfect, but you love me' That's the true measure of sisters~ Beautiful sweetie ... both of you are my girls and I'm sooooooo proud of you both~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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BrandeeM Junior Member
since 2002-05-01
Posts 45 |
Now this is a breathe of fresh air... Beautiful... |
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ambermize Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 157California |
Tanny- you know I love, love, love this one! we better hurry up and get to see each other before they run us of here with all our mushy sister stuff!! love you, kiss caiya!! Rob- we have given ya quite and insight to us both havent we?.....even the nasty side  he he he....(I am at a toss up between two)Mistletoe- thanks so much as always... Kris- I see that she has broken you in to the nastie eh?.....and you fit in very well I must add.......you wait...I am just slow to reply.....aske tanya Marge- you have watched me grow so much here...since what 99? We both love you too, and the lil ones?? keep the pictures a comen women!!!! BrandeeM- thanks so much...see that you are new...I am sure your gonna love it, love it, love it here!! I remember when I first came....*sigh* thanks agian.... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
it's like. . . looking at a mirror that's looking at itself. . . well done. . . and very heartfelt. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Lovely chronicle of a beautiful friendship. Sandra |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
I am truly touched by this beautiful poem of friendship and sisterly love. marie@mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Oh wow....incredibly heart felt poetry. So many beautiful lines as well, I can't even pick a favorite. You have a masterpiece here. Well done!  *Krista Knutson* |
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ambermize Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 157California |
Sven- sometimes I must admit, we are more alike then you know! thanx Vandana- Glad to see you liked it! Sandra- thanx lady, glad you enjoyed! Mycafe- No other love is like it, I have come to realize.....(even though there were times we got into out "little fights" eh tanny? ) Alwye- thanx so much..(check it out tanny...were a masterpiece!!) |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Yes Ambs..."little"...always... I'll never tell anyone ANY different...  You know I had to see this one again..I love it!!! and? I love you sis! Tanya Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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