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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738


0 posted 2002-06-26 10:09 AM


What is remorse?
That gathers sleep..
What is the rhyme
of all belief?

"listen..."
lullabyes of weep,
"tell me..."
in a tangled sheet.

A Fantasy
of linen--spread...
a tantalize
of skin--instead.

Simple certain
circumstance--
Simple curtain
of romance--
dancing piles
of velvet hue...
I ripple reds
in blue of you.

I gather pile
beneath my plow--
I am smile
of your endow....

I long to sing
a pirhouette
and dance shadows
in regret...

piles of sand
in wet of haunt--
castles hinge,
in want of want...

[This message has been edited by serenity (06-26-2002 10:56 AM).]

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2002-06-26 10:10 AM



I want you to write for me!

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2002-06-26 11:06 AM


What is remorse?
That gathers sleep..
What is the rhyme
of all belief?


"listen..."
lullabyes of weep,
"tell me..."
in a tangled sheet.

A Fantasy
of linen--spread...
a tantalize
of skin--instead.

Simple certain
circumstance--
Simple curtain
of romance--
dancing piles
of velvet hue...
I ripple reds
in blue of you.

===========================


IWISHIHADWROTETHIS!!!

well you writing it is almost like me writing it..right?




Duncan
Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455

3 posted 2002-06-26 12:22 PM


A Fantasy
of linen--spread...
a tantalize
of skin--instead.

Simple certain
circumstance--
Simple curtain
of romance--
dancing piles
of velvet hue...
I ripple reds
in blue of you.


Once again...damn, you're good!

Forgetting all I'm lacking
Completely and complete
I'll take your invitation
You take all of me

Lifehouse

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