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Krishankins
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0 posted 2002-06-25 09:20 PM


A shoebox, old and tattered
Love letters in tri-fold
If dreams were judged in karat weight
I'd have a kingdom's gold

[This message has been edited by Krishankins (06-25-2002 09:21 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-06-25 09:32 PM




(smiles) Oh Kristopher, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, may you always cherish all these sweet letters and find pure gold of love in your loves heart forever! (sigh) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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2 posted 2002-06-25 10:37 PM


If dreams were judged
in gold cascade
I'd pocket more
day by day...

Just couldn't resist...

Found a quote for you..
"To be simple is
to be great"
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Take care!!
~D

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



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3 posted 2002-06-26 02:09 AM


another amazing write from you!

I have an old shoebox filled with love letters from ex boyfriends, they are fun to read every now and then when im bored. lol

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4 posted 2002-06-26 02:13 AM


Indeed, the weight of your words are folded just right!  You carry them well Kris!
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5 posted 2002-06-26 12:54 PM



If we could but judge
by weight of word
you'd feel the nudge
of verses heard...

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6 posted 2002-06-26 01:02 PM


This is fantastic!!! And you have something much more precious than gold...you have everlasting words of love and memories!

Well done!  I love the images and the sentiment.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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7 posted 2002-06-26 01:27 PM


Kris, your work sure is golden

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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