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Krishankins
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0 posted 2002-06-25 01:52 AM



To my little girl, Josie Nichole. I miss you sweetie. I love you most!!

Daddy


Heaven hopes beyond the moon
For love to cross the stars
Sending you the sweetest dreams
No matter where you are

your 100grit love is smoothing my soul

© Copyright 2002 Kristopher Hankins - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-06-25 02:03 AM


Yr really good at these, Kris. Yr poems are like breaths -- life-giving and small in equal amounts.

So yeh, enjoy yr words.

These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun.
-RHCP

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2002-06-25 05:13 AM


Smooth as silk...James
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3 posted 2002-06-25 05:57 AM


Short and sweet.  Wonderful!!!!

Love,
Ladycat

Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.


Krishankins
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4 posted 2002-06-25 12:45 PM


i can never say how good these replies make
me feel about writing.
thanks guys

Kris

your 100grit love is smoothing my soul

ambermize
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5 posted 2002-06-25 03:36 PM


God, I can relate here. Must be soo hard to be away from her...don't worry I am sure she knows her daddy loves her....and she is lucky to have you!....

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6 posted 2002-06-25 03:40 PM


As you will see, I appreciate short and sweet.  That certainly describes your work.
Well done.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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7 posted 2002-06-25 03:48 PM


...Beautiful...

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8 posted 2002-06-25 03:52 PM


I can't begin to tell you how refreshing it is to see a "faithful" daddy!!!

This is an exceptional piece Kris...

*I know she knows*

~Hugs between the miles for you and your little girl*

ML
Devina

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



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9 posted 2002-06-25 04:11 PM



Thoughtful snippets...and I'll bet
you're full of them...

keep sharing, doling them out, one by one...
can't keep them to yourself, you know...

Charisma
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10 posted 2002-06-25 06:53 PM


*sigh* Beautiful!!!!

Charisma

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11 posted 2002-06-25 07:38 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Kristopher, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I know deep down Josie is always thinking of you and will always love you! (smiles) These short poems are beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Larry C
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12 posted 2002-06-27 02:25 AM


Kris,
You know how to break my heart. What an awesome write. I hope all is well. Peace and comfort to you.

Show you care to those you love...today.

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13 posted 2002-06-28 11:32 AM


How very beautiful. *S*
ecrivan
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14 posted 2002-06-28 12:25 PM


Kris,

Tender thoughts in so few words...appreciate your sharing..stuff like this always gets me
to ask why we're here.

Martin


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