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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-06-24 09:01 PM






~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2002-06-24 09:11 PM


such a lovely presentation *s

hugs
M

Titia Geertman
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Netherlands
2 posted 2002-06-24 09:34 PM



You just won't stop to amaze me, won't you dear

It's beautiful Marge, don't know how you do all that swirling but it looks great

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2002-06-24 09:35 PM


I dont know how you do it, but it sure looks great.  

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}


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4 posted 2002-06-24 09:42 PM


Margie girl darling heart sister, I read your words I see the beautiful graphic and instantly I’m bathed into heart’s true bliss. This is outstandingly beautiful, truly you are a poetess of supreme skill and the way you swirl words is second to none. Do I love this? You know I do. Pure wonder darling heart utterly utterly perfect.

Somewhere in my memory is a light that whenever your name appears it shines a soft and wondrous glow of pure awe that you always manage to pull something spectacular from out of your inkwell. And you do darling heart and you do.
I love it utterly utterly utterly

Love and light

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2002-06-24 10:17 PM


Marge,
I don't know how you do it either. But you have captured an audience.

NewEnglandlazurlu
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A Mountain Paradise
6 posted 2002-06-24 10:19 PM


This is beautiful and such a joy to read! You are so truly gifted.   I'll bet this took hours and hours to put together.

Hey, at this rate, you'll have a new career as a graphic artist!!  Impressive girlfriend, Hugs, Marti

" My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother."

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2002-06-24 10:32 PM


WynterFriend~
Thanks gal ... it just spoke to my ink~

Titia~
I hope I always succeed in 'amazing' you~
It was just that bottle of 'swirling' ink~

GentleSpirit~
Words in swirl just seem to have a mind of their own~
Thanks gal~

MarshaLove~
Thanks love ... don't know about that 'skill' stuff ... but it sure keeps me busy trying new things~

Seymour~
Awwwww, as long as you're in the audience, I'm happy~

Marti~
Knowing that you know the work involved ... and it's only Excedrin headache # 124 !
Thanks sweeite .... whew !
I've had that graphic for over nine months and it spoke the title the day I saw it ... just took me a while to get back to it~
Needed the slowdown ... it put the brakes on my little muses mouths for a day anyhow~

***Thank you all ... you make it soooooo much fun to share with~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Magicmystery
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8 posted 2002-06-24 10:43 PM


This is just Gorgeous Marge!!! and befitting a Full Moon!!! I just love the picture!!!


Sherry

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9 posted 2002-06-24 10:51 PM


MagicMystery~
Thank you so much ... and wouldn't you know ... this 'Moonie' can't even see the moon tonight .... we're STILL covered in torrential downpours in Florida.
Nine days straight !!  argh~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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10 posted 2002-06-24 11:19 PM


Marge, this is completely gorgeous, both in word and in presentation.  I haven't gotten much time to be online lately, but I'm glad I stumbled upon you so quickly tonight.  I'm never dissapointed.  Beautiful work.  

*Krista Knutson*

"An eye for an eye only ends up making the whole world blind." -Gandhi

SmartChick
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11 posted 2002-06-25 12:08 PM


Wow Marge! This is beautiful. I love the way you did this. You are so artistic.
TwoHeartsOnePen
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12 posted 2002-06-25 12:13 PM


This is truly magical to me.

Distance is the prison for our bodies, but no prison could weaken our passion.

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13 posted 2002-06-25 12:38 PM


What are fine artist you are Marge.  I'm in awe...whoa !

mycafe

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14 posted 2002-06-25 01:08 PM


Marge:  A lunar lovely! A woman in the moon makes far more sense to me!

Betty Lou Hebert

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15 posted 2002-06-25 03:51 PM


My rhythmic beat was fluttered by this WONDERFUL display of true artistry.

Amazing.

Krishankins

your 100grit love is smoothing my soul

Krissy
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16 posted 2002-06-25 03:57 PM


Auntie Margie girl this is so incredibly beautiful, you have an amazing eye, I swear where I used to just look at things I now see them, and this is a gift you have given me. Thank you.

I am so excited about September, I want to see if osmosis really does work. And to get to hug you too

Tell your garden I’m coming to see it and so to start blooming again.

I wub you

Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

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17 posted 2002-06-26 02:35 PM


wow, just love your work, your imagination and your ability to put forth what is in your mind
this is lovely, a creation of beauty

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18 posted 2002-06-26 03:15 PM


You keep getting better and better, deer-y Marge.

Squirrely Mike

These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun.
-RHCP

Marge Tindal
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19 posted 2002-06-26 09:04 PM


Krista~
Gosh darn it ... I'm SO GLAD to see you gal~
Tickled to pieces that you found me~

SweetSuzieQ~
Awwww, shucks ... just doing what I love ... sharing thoughts~

TwoHearts~
Thanks so very much ... welcome to Passions~

MyCafe~
I can tell you that this one was a wench to do ~
Each and every letter had to be placed separately ... to achieve the 'swirl of thought' I was looking for~
I'm really pleased with the finished canvas and so glad it's been enjoyed~

BettyLou~
AhhhhHA ... you WILL see 'Lunar Lovely' in a future post ... thank you for that lyrical inspire~
Tee-Hee ... woman-in-the-moon .. was there EVER any doubt ?

KrisHankins~
Thanks very much~

Krissy~
quote:
I swear where I used to just look at things I now see them, and this is a gift you have given me.


Now I am the one who thanks YOU !
Adore the thought of 'osmosis'~
I'm waiting for that *hug* as much as you are~
The garden will bloom in JOY~

JellyBeans~
Thankee gal ... love sharing with you~

BSquirrel~
A sweet thing to say ... I sure try~
Hope to always please you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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20 posted 2002-06-28 11:04 AM


Yanno, gal... you were a powerhouse of a talent when you simply used words... (notice I didn't say you used simple words *G*) Then you started coaxing your words into amazing patterns and shapes and we discovered new depths to your talent... Now, I know it to be boundless. *S* This is beautiful... I'm ROFL @ you finding ways to hush your muses when most poets are praying theirs will speak! LOL
Madame Chipmunk
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21 posted 2002-06-28 12:14 PM


I love the beautiful swirl, Marge....
as I have said before, you really should go into the greeting card business...
your poems with their amazing graphics are better than any of the e-cards I've ever seen.

~ swirling hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Marge Tindal
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22 posted 2002-06-28 02:37 PM


SuthernGal~
You are just the sweetest lil' thang~
No wonder I love you so~
Tee-Hee ... that 'depth' may be due to the rising waters ... we are STILL under the onslaught of POUR~

Lyra~
One heck of a nice comment ... thank you~
Like I mentioned ... I'm working on it~
But perhaps the $ is to be found in a store line~
I'm learning ... the *big guys* play hard ball to keep the competition out ... but ... we'll see~
Thank you so much~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge Tindal
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23 posted 2005-08-21 10:59 AM


Bee bump a doodle for a friend~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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