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Ivy Rose
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0 posted 2002-06-23 11:16 PM



Tonight, I see the frost
on your breath...like halos
of soft endearment.So near,
yet so far away from me.My heart
echos empty air where arm's embrace
should be.My soul misses everything
that speaks of you....the way you walk,
the way you talk.Even the soft glow
of written words, does not dispel
these shadows, these images.I am
emptied of all delight; for your
nearness is all I seek,How does it feel
to dance in the light with you?How
do I erase the barriers of empty space?
My heart is lonely, tonight.My soul
seeks the solace of one deep kiss,
one embrace of love and light.

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1 posted 2002-06-23 11:19 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Ivy, this is so sadly beautiful, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you but I know with all my heart you are a very loving person and I know you will find all the kisses your heart desires and true joy is destined to be yours forever! (kiss on cheek) You are a delight to us all, sweet friend, keep your chin up, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-06-24 06:34 AM


Very poignant write, but very very beautiful.  Well done.

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}


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3 posted 2002-06-24 07:52 AM


heartwrenched but beautiful penned....wonderful done

(((warm hugs)))
Charisma

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4 posted 2002-06-24 06:44 PM


Ivy,  writing as you do, I do believe you
will find that which you desire...

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2002-06-24 06:50 PM


"Nearness is all I seek."
This poem has has lovely choice lines...James

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6 posted 2002-06-24 06:51 PM


enjoyed
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