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Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2002-06-23 10:58 PM

Strawberry Moon Swoon
By: Noah Eaton
6/23/02

From the a la mode eye of a fruit punch eclipse
A gypsy dancer dances calypso against the porcelain whiteness
Her lips are of cranberry juice, her smile as cambric tea
She dances on and on to win a lovers destiny

She entices her lovers moon, caressing his vanilla alone
Blushing raspberry truffle kisses among eyelids of abalone
She sees the slight embarrassment encumbering his shortcake impression
Gazing into cherry tomato eyes faint yet warm to her intentions

And she begins to bring up the topic of reincarnation
Sharing a dish of strawberries and cream with her muses illusion
Dancing on the paraselene of her lovers eyes from her cenacle
Slowly climbing the flight of stairs to live in his eyes to seek Junes miracles

From deep inside he feels her kissing the calyx of his hearts rose
And he sighs, sighs deeply, sighs steady properly to impose
Two lovers now one, topping a strawberry dessert with kisses of whipped cream
On the eve of this strawberry moon swoon, feasting together joyously at this summer solstice patisserie...

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (06-23-2002 11:02 PM).]

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

1 posted 2002-06-23 11:03 PM

Noah..WOW!!! This is absolutely breathtaking.
Your words are always so well-chosen and strung together in the most creative ways.

***Ivy Rose

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-06-23 11:06 PM

NOAH!! This is breathtaking!!
Wonderful my sidekick!!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

mycafe
Senior Member

since 2002-05-23

Posts 584

3 posted 2002-06-23 11:39 PM

Wow! First thing I noticed "Noah used more colours this time".

Interesting poem here !

mycafe

Accordionmaid
Member

since 2001-10-28

Posts 153
MA/USA

4 posted 2002-06-24 01:01 AM

Berry, berry good!

"I think I go home."
(Garbo)

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2002-06-24 03:53 AM

Noah!
This is excellent........

                       "And she begins to bring up the topic of reincarnation
                 Sharing a dish of strawberries and cream with her muses illusion
                  Dancing on the paraselene of her lovers eyes from her cenacle
                 Slowly climbing the flight of stairs to live in his eyes to seek Junes
                                         miracles"

Superb!   You should take a vacation more often.

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

6 posted 2002-06-24 08:10 AM

*wow* yeah another *WOW* in row, but just because I like this piece a lot.

you are an amazing wrter!

((hugs))
Charisma

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2002-06-24 08:19 AM

Very nice choice of words...James

Singing Sparrow
Member

since 2002-05-12

Posts 94

8 posted 2002-06-24 05:40 PM

Gotta love it!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

9 posted 2002-06-24 05:53 PM

Whoa!
I didn't know whether to eat it, drink it, or read it

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2002-06-24 06:56 PM

liked it

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

11 posted 2002-06-24 06:57 PM

A delicacy no matter how you read it!!
I concure those "wow's" and add my own ...
WOW!!!

Incredibly delicious!!!

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