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S Arthur Grey
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woven by a poet's loom

0 posted 2002-06-23 06:16 PM


Numbers

    
      
Two days of you
began on the
seventeenth
You seemed surprised
to have me calling
the first day that I arrived
Yes, it was nearly two
for you and one
for me and seven
would come to soon
in the morning
but you had been
on my mind
twenty one / seven
of late
No, not twenty four
you have to allow
at least three
for some recovery time
you see
And one curious thing
I just noticed
they all add up to ten
      
      
    
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1slick_lady
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1 posted 2002-06-24 12:01 PM


with no forwarding address?...helen
S Arthur Grey
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woven by a poet's loom
2 posted 2002-06-24 12:36 PM


couldn't find a home for this poor orphan . . .
1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
3 posted 2002-06-24 03:06 PM


looks like...it's home now...
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4 posted 2002-06-24 08:00 PM




(smiles) Wow, this is a very thought-provoking and mathematical poem,s weet friend, I think it takes one to solve these logic puzzles we ask and beg of in order to win ones reasoning of the material we select! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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BluesSerenade
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5 posted 2002-06-25 12:14 PM


I liked the way your words added up, and the recovery time you snuck in there...have to love it and keep a little something for yourself!  
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