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Spirit Of Twilight
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0 posted 2002-06-23 03:32 AM



1.Whenever I eat chocolate
Absorb it’s deep brown hue
My heart gives this queer little leap
Cause I am thinking of you.
Chocolate brown skin,
With chocolate eyes cradled in white.
Chocolate in your chocolate color hands,
For birthdays to come and Valentines!

2.Whenever I eat chocolate
Like a little kid.
I think of you and myself,
Fighting in childhood days.
Brown for the rainy days,
And the rich Indian earth scent.

3.Whenever I eat chocolate,
In it’s sweet molten delight.
I wonder when the day will come,
When we’ll sit side by side.
Looking at each other-
me with my tea colored eyes
and you with your lovely chocolate eyes.

Ch: chocolate for all days romantic,
Filled with the lover’s delight.
Coffee for cosy, friendly days,
Cuddled by the fireside.

4.Whenever I drink coffee,
Its fragrance makes me mad.
Cause I think of you as you smile
Right up to your chocolate eyes.

5.Whenever I drink coffee,
Get that desirable “high”.
I wish you were here with me,
Chatting chummily over funny times.

Ch: chocolate for all days romantic,
Filled with the lover’s delight.
Coffee for cosy, friendly days,
Cuddled by the fireside.


6.Stretch your hand over the seas,
I have a chocolate to give,
With the choicest heart’s filling
Home-made and delicious as can be.

Ch: chocolate for all days romantic,
Filled with the lover’s delight.
Coffee for cosy, friendly days,
Cuddled by the fireside.

7.Come over my chocolate man
This lass dreams and waits.
Come lets share a chocolate
Revel in it’s richness
And then sip some coffee
Home-brewed and velvety!

© Neha Malhotra
22/6/02



© Copyright 2002 Neha Malhotra - All Rights Reserved
Charisma
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1 posted 2002-06-23 04:30 AM


like this chocolate song, but well chocolate is rated high at my favourites list. Enjoyed it very much.

Charisma

Spirit Of Twilight
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2 posted 2002-06-23 04:32 AM


Chocolates are the most tastiest things.Yum!
Thanks for your reply and glad you replied!
~neha

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3 posted 2002-06-27 06:25 AM


*giggles**
Ohhh..how I LOVE this poem.
Haven't read you in a while..my fault probably. Lovely..simply lovely.

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2002-06-27 06:30 AM


I have some special chocolate memories myself...James
Spirit Of Twilight
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5 posted 2002-06-27 06:36 AM


Temptress,
I am glad you liked my poem. OOh..I love chocolate so much!
Thanks for your sweet reply!
Neha

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6 posted 2002-06-27 06:39 AM


James,
I am glad this poem stirred some chocolate memories. Chocolates are so lovely...soothing and romantic!
~Neha

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7 posted 2002-06-27 09:54 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, I LOVE CHOCOLATE SO SO MUCH!!! (kiss on cheek) May you always rest softly on chocolate dreams and find sweetness in loves eyes always, sweet friend, this is lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Neha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Spirit Of Twilight
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8 posted 2002-06-28 01:47 AM


Noah,
You are such an angel! Thanks for your lovely words and thanks for reading!
~neha

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