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Magnus
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0 posted 2002-06-22 10:01 PM


A Smile
Edges graced by ivory white
a star’s radiance shining brightly
beneath green
  of sight

A frown
seldom seen or felt
as golden words flow
down into the voice of
          light tips
                  on keys

Grace me in shine
till there are no stars
to lighten the night
of your soul’s strumming
of my heart’s strings
when I see your
smile.

© Copyright 2002 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-06-22 10:06 PM


Oh Barry...you make me want to....
...*SIGH*...

Wonderful...perfectly wonderful!
~Hugs, Nancy~

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2 posted 2002-06-22 10:07 PM


Barry

A smile can do that?

A smile can do that!  


ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2002-06-22 10:18 PM


Beautifully done, as always. ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2002-06-22 10:28 PM


My, what you do to a smile!!!

This was beautiful in flow and thought!!!

*big smiles here*

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



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5 posted 2002-06-22 10:32 PM



Magnus
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6 posted 2002-06-22 10:34 PM


MICHAEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


You nut!!!


Put a really big one on this man's face...

You are too much...

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7 posted 2002-06-22 10:43 PM




(giggles in delight) Oh my, I wish I knew how to do HTML scripting better, for I would have put the biggest smilie I could find here just for you! (big hugggssssss) LOL! This is soooooo cute, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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8 posted 2002-06-22 10:50 PM


Magnus darling heart this is exquisite truly this is awesome writing the construction the flow the words all flow together to make a whole that is amazingly beautiful and so absolutely gorgeous. Excellent writing absolutely excellent.

‘Deer’s reply has put a huge grin on my face, while your writing fills me with heavenly bliss. Superb darling heart utterly utterly superb

>
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

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9 posted 2002-06-22 11:52 PM


Your words radiate with warmth, could almost see your smile there for a minute!
Or was that mine~  

Nice~

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