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Masked Intruder

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since 1999-05-23

Posts 1231
Near golden sunsets

0 posted 2002-06-28 02:19 AM

It whispered through the waving grass
snuck between the shading trees
broke from the bare brown earth
hissed across the hot beach sands
roared over the ocean's raging waters
blasted through the blue night skies
and exploded into the endless stars.

angelswing
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since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

1 posted 2002-06-28 04:06 AM

How cool is the imagery you've used in this poem, fantastic stuff - I love the way you take us on a journey describing the pure essence around you ... Loved it .
L.of.L. Tom .
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'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2002-06-28 04:10 AM

Well MI, I'm not that much of a building lover but you've done the poetic marvel with this write.
I can see it from another perspective. That is after all the purpose of writing this way isn't it?

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2002-06-28 02:19 PM

reducing me to sighs again because I love your work so much again, eh? Ahh..thats okay. I enjoy it, Luv.

Misting ya.

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-06-28 11:01 PM

BRAVO!!! I am not a fan of buildings either but I just love the personification you use here! (smiles) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Philip, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

shadow974
Senior Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

5 posted 2002-06-29 12:31 PM

Great images. Onward and upward. Enjoyed

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.
ARAB PROVERB

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