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Strawberry Moons |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT 
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In the mild heat of a young summer night running wild across endless star-filled skies a lost child searching an answer that's right in the tiled questions within Heaven's eyes What's above, and beyond the edge we live and what of things that will never make sense like true love lost and all we have to give riding dove wings and dreaming in past tense With shadows cast upon such barren lands moonlight glows, fruitless and in decadence giving shows of what is in empty hands leaving woes of each moon's rememberance On the rise within just a few nights soon with new eyes feast on the Strawberry Moon *June 24th, 2002 will be another full moon ... but this moon holds much to my desire. It will be this years Strawberry Moon. create an addiction .... share a smile!! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Craig, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I have heard a few things about this special moon, may you have a wonderful evening when it comes aroud like I hope we all do! (smiles) This is lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Strawberry moon, I love it. I hope it is a wonderful romantic night for you. Sandra |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CTOwen~ Just lovely poetic thoughts ... with a learning lesson thrown in ... I like that~ Thank you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Craig, I love anything to do with the moon! And...a Strawberry Moon? I shall have to read up on this.... after I get the song "Strawberry Wine" out of my head....LOL ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
In the mild heat of a young summer night running wild across endless star-filled skies a lost child searching an answer that's right in the tiled questions within Heaven's eyes Your words are impressive, I mean really! I read what Nancy wrote, and yes that song comes to mind. Yoss/Wilfred Yeats, posted the words to that song in another forum that inspired him to write one of his many wonderful poems. "I'll be a dandy and I'll be a rover you'll know who I am by the song that I sing" *Bless him* You triggered a nice thought with this poem of yours...it is lovely Craig~ Thanks~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
ctowen "What's above, and beyond the edge we live and what of things that will never make sense like true love lost and all we have to give riding dove wings and dreaming in past tense" Beautifully written ..and a strawberry moon too! I'll be looking for it. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
craig, I have missed your poetry on these blue pages! Your writing is always so excellently described and rhymed. well done. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very nice! i'll have to look for that strawberry moon hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'In the mild heat of a young summer night running wild across endless star-filled skies a lost child searching an answer that's right in the tiled questions within Heaven's eyes' How cool is that? I never heard of that, but now I'll definitely be watching out for it! Great poem...beautiful imagery! sp    I've been down this road forever, |
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Spirit Of Twilight Member
since 2002-01-11
Posts 116India |
Simply breath-taking and exquisite. Keep writing! ~Neha |
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Shadowed_Innersense Junior Member
since 2001-12-05
Posts 49somewhere at the edge |
In fond rememberance .... |
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