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Anvrill
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since 2002-06-21
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in the interzone now

0 posted 2002-06-22 02:27 PM


Mm, midnight minty!

Throw a towel over your head;

that's the way we reproduce.

I miss being obscene in public,

and I want a satanic rubber duck.

Not one that glows in the dark, though,

since I've already got too many eyes in my room.


Have my letters

all washed off of your body?

M

I

N

E

Have the scars healed,

or will they ever?


More.


Jump over the stars

and feel my angsty reachiness.

Goth-kisses;

in love,

with a great deal of d-words

and maybe too much music

with drum machines.


Sometimes it's downright hard to miss you,

when everywhere I turn,

there's something only we share.

Feel my angsty reachiness!

© Copyright 2002 LL Hager - All Rights Reserved
bsquirrel
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1 posted 2002-06-22 02:29 PM


God, you make me so happy! Not very goth of either of us. I love you, babygrrl.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Magnus
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2 posted 2002-06-22 02:30 PM


Excellent....really like how you put this
together....and the perfect ending...

Anvrill
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in the interzone now
3 posted 2002-06-22 02:31 PM


Well, Mikhail, there is such thing as a "perky goth," although the name alone leaves me running in terror. I prefer to think of myself as "other" or "freak in general," especially when faced by such oogie things as my ex-creation Xander, and my brother's gothling girlfriend. Save me!

And thank you, Magnus. yeesh, I'm happy today.



Feel my angsty reachiness!

[This message has been edited by Anvrill (06-22-2002 02:33 PM).]

Madame Chipmunk
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4 posted 2002-06-22 02:40 PM


Full of sweetness...full of love for somebody...
lovely poem, Anvrill

~ lots of hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-06-22 02:43 PM




(smiles) Awwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is sweet and clever and filled with so much love to share! (sigh) We are all so lucky to have you here, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anvrill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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