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Zinsser
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0 posted 2002-06-22 10:53 AM



Dearest Love,

Come to me
Let us meet
In the night sky
Show me the universe
Through your eyes
Eyes that shine
Far greater
Then all the stars
Heaven has offered

Come to me
Clear and pure
As our hearts
In youth once were
Thoughts of our
Romance
Warm me
When were apart
I long only
For the rhythm
Of your heart

Come to me Love
Rest your head
Upon my breasts
Free yourself
In turn
Freeing me


© Copyright 2002 Connie McDonald - All Rights Reserved
Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15
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1 posted 2002-06-22 11:14 AM


lovely romantic images in your poem - thanks Paul
Zinsser
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2 posted 2002-06-22 11:20 AM


Paul, Thank You very much....
~~ Connie ~~

Magnus
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3 posted 2002-06-22 11:54 AM


The soft whispered plea...

as powerful as the universe itself...

If he doesn't....let me know...I will go kick
start him for you...

Nicely done Connie...

Zinsser
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4 posted 2002-06-22 07:25 PM


Magnus:  Thanks  : )
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