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D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2002-06-22 07:00 AM


Sad music in festive streets
Dancing spirits
Intoxicated needs
Get down dirty blues

Sounds moaning music
Swaying passion of heated notes
Sweated tempos of New Orleans streets
Low life get down blues

Trumpets calling
Sax a following
The band is steaming up
The depth of jazz
The quarter is a rocking
With voices taking down the blues

Sweet mama daddy’s listening
The booty is a moving
Body rhythms are a quaking
Intertwining get it down right blues

The booze is a spilling
The room is a spinning
Bump and grind music
Hell raising spirits
Pass down the bottle blues

The sun is awakening
While the band is unwinding
The inferno is cooling
Exhausted lips triumph
Down and out blues fading

Spirits of Old New Orleans depart
Haunt the shadows of humid days
From buildings holding such charm
Songwriters will make the day
Bury the blues of the night

Email me if at davelyoung1@hotmail.com
D.Lester Young (06/22/02)
Tuscaloosa, AL
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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2002-06-22 12:15 PM


smiling...it's an odd feeling now, going home after a night/morning like that...leaving the city, clothes damp with the sweat of dance, and riding into the neat box suburbs, and waking in the air conditioned cool---makes it all seem so unreal. Just like when you LEAVE the suburbs, hit one of those dank brick line cavern type clubs--it makes suburbia seem like a homogenized NIGHTMARE.

You have captured the essence of "my love" quite well. I hope ya have a good time, Dave!

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