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ThunderMage
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0 posted 2002-06-21 11:41 PM


When I'm in her arms, the world seems so light.
It rests on my shoulders and tests my might.
And when she smiles, angels sing.
I hear them now and see them flying.
But when her arms don't hold me tight,
I feel that I have lost my might!
But then she smiles and heals my pain,
And holds me in her arms again.
What power is this that I now feel?
Is this just a dream or is it real?

What is life without poetry and adventure?

© Copyright 2002 Liam Hall - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-06-21 11:44 PM


That is beautiful Liam. I love you baby.

Cold hands means a warm heart

ThunderMage
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2 posted 2002-06-21 11:45 PM


I love you too princess.

What is life without poetry and adventure?

Madame Chipmunk
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3 posted 2002-06-21 11:46 PM


Wow....terrific job, Liam...

~ lots of hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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4 posted 2002-06-21 11:48 PM




(smiles) Oh Liam, this is wonderful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words shine with loves true smiles! (big hugggsssss) May you always find heaven in your arms, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liam, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (06-21-2002 11:48 PM).]

ThunderMage
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5 posted 2002-06-21 11:50 PM


Thank you. And who wouldn't love a girl like Julie?

What is life without poetry and adventure?

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