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wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2002-06-11 12:11 PM

you pulled my eyelids over their shades
held my elbows on the nightstand abruptly kicking the
sofa with one small step and numbly cursing bloody toes
for they know not of thinking as you do look stupid
in those clothes stepping into the night not unconvicingly
half dressed as Death half divided in shredded lives
you would claim these as your own pure sight of confidence
I saw you kill the reaches of a curious hand I could not look away
I could not recoil as a serpent the tree blocks my vision so wide is its unleavened breadth
slowing down the rhythm of day breaking open shells choking on hoarse apple seeds
vomiting indigo blood crepuscular veins of golden hue kick my eyeballs shut
the sockets of my skull impregnated with the devil’s son
i weep in the clockwork orange

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (06-12-2002 06:12 PM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-06-11 12:12 PM

Beautifully written

Cold hands means a warm heart

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2002-06-12 04:43 PM

walt, I love this new voice of yours. . . it's very well spoken and told. . .

exactly what we need around here. . . great work. . .

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wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

3 posted 2002-06-12 05:56 PM

thanks and Sven I appreciate it alot cuz as long as there are someone's like you then I will keep writing these

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

4 posted 2002-06-12 05:57 PM

Walt,
this brought back vivid memories of the Clockwork Orange and all its mania...thanks, I think.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

5 posted 2002-06-12 08:13 PM

You sir are weird...and that's a GOOD thing!

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