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Kitty**
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0 posted 2002-06-20 07:30 PM




L.istening to the truth in my heart.
O.pting to go my own way.
V.ictory will never be mine I know.
E.choes of a long ago day.
S.hadows of night are calling.
E.nding what could have been.
N.ever reality, only my dreams.
D.awn approaches, lighting my sins.

If you can't make it so,
you need to let it go!

© Copyright 2002 Kitty Sandridge - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-06-20 09:35 PM


Awesome! That is all I can say.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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2 posted 2002-06-23 05:45 PM


Like this...James
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3 posted 2002-06-23 07:53 PM


Beautiful acrostic...nicely done...
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4 posted 2002-06-23 08:09 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Kitty, this is so sad but wonderful, sweet friend, this acrostic is sincerw and excellent and reveals you so well! (sigh) I wish for loves beginning to sequel off that end for you, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kitty, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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5 posted 2002-06-23 08:57 PM


This is a wonderful, moving piece.  Makes me think of several of my relationships. so simply, so to the point.

I like it alot.

Love,
Ladycat

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