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Masked Intruder
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Near golden sunsets

0 posted 2002-06-20 03:35 AM



We've often danced beneath the blankets
of star-dappled clouds that  
rolled in sensational ecstasy
on the tempestuous storm skirts  
whimpering then moaning
with each thunderous gust
finally leaving us quivering in exhausted embrace



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ethome
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1 posted 2002-06-20 03:42 AM


Love the parallel trip through our universe right into the sleepy bedroom heart!

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2 posted 2002-06-20 06:38 AM


*sigh* Is that YOU? Is it REALLY you in here? Its been too long since we've talked m'friend, and we have much to catch up on. Meanwhile, I'm putting this awesome painting of your soul on display at the top somewhere again. You know why I love this..I'm quite sure you do.. Misting ya, Love.

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

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3 posted 2002-06-20 06:42 AM


Me again, Love..
You know, I was just amazed that right after I typed this response, I read your response to my Stone Casting poem...and you said the same thing I did about catching up..etc..



Feel free to go on that hunt anytime you like. I'm on MSN and AIM more often when I get on line these days.

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

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4 posted 2002-06-20 04:38 PM


okay, this paints a picture far too good to be back here. . .

I like this. . . it's well done. . .and well spoken. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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5 posted 2002-07-07 04:56 AM


still too damned far back..
Lovely again

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

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