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Under Love's Spell
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Under Love's Spell |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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Back then we were so young And had almost finished school How much I looked up to you I always thought you were so cool There was a party at the beach Neither one of us could wait Such a night would promise love This was to be our first real date We stepped out for some air And you looked into my eyes I could almost read your mind So full of wonder and surprise You whispered in my ear As you tenderly took my hand In the moonlight we walked Two young lovers on the sand The gentle breeze caressed us As we stood for a while It was then I became enchanted By your warm sensual smile Our lips found one another By the light of the moon Firmly held in your embrace Love's power made me swoon We made love on the sand For no longer could we wait Love had claimed us as victims So easily sealing our fate We strolled back together Drunk on love we both were I still remember your touch And the feelings you stirred Suetang |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Sue, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this made me cry because I have never been on a date yet and me and my dream girl Joanna may meet this summer and just the thought of dating her and looking into her shiny green eyes makes me cry in joy! (kiss on cheek) This is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wow! Sue....You have a real knack for portraying those love scenes with such sincerity of heart but with an underlying biological pressure pushing against the words in the leading verses. Very very well done! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
(Shaking the sand out of my shoes).... Nicely painted canvas of a moment when two hearts beat as one... Thank You Sue... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I enjoyed this, Sue. It always amazes me, the power of remembered love. Sandra |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Hey Sue - Hot times down under! I loved this - reminded me of a wonderful date with my hubby. Here I'm sending you pictures of flowers and you're writing steamy love poems! Isn't life a hoot? Hugs, Marti " My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother." |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
So romantic Sue, I absolutely loved this piece...sweet memories  mycafe |
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